JitteryDragon's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Wingding Refn]

I don't know if nostalgia is what you're going for, but I think it's a great thing and I have listened a few times because of it. The lyrics work well with your voice and the effect you used ^_^ Thank you for making this.

Micahman5000 responds:

Definitely! You nailed it on that. Thank you very much! I'm really glad you liked it!

[Þo Zöʒe Ĵvvökl Ëdéöjegï]

I'm hearing a lot of good stuff in here. The intro has a nice buildup and I like the synths you use. Of course, it would be really cool to hear more mid-tones (filler sounds if you think it works) to counteract the emptiness between the drums and the synths. I would also say the same for the second part with the beats. It helps (for me) to focus on the important beats and emphasize them with chords or a good arp. In the third part with the key/beat change, I'm not sure what you're going for, but if you wanted to go for a sort of breaking-down, uncanny feeling, it might be more impactful with some sort of bass tone as well as a stronger transition into that part - (especially since you seem to be doing a beat drop from the previous part. But honestly, I like that you have definitive parts to the song, it makes it dynamic. I guess just work on transitions in general :) Pretty cool

yoshster061 responds:

Thank you for the feedback, this really helps me out for the future. I'm so gad that you put time into criticism of my first song. I honesty didn't even know what to expect from my first song. I'm at least glad there were parts that you liked, and parts where you gave me feedback. I just really appreciate it. Thx so much man; I'll take your feedback into consideration for next time. :)


~~~~yoshser061